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May. 13th, 2024 04:34 pmPage 1
Panel 1 (extra large) The scene takes place in the askr indoor baths. We get a side profile of nude Lethe, seated in Tiki's open mouth (Tiki is in her dragon form), while Tiki's tongue tip has inserted itself Lethe's vagina. Tiki is probably crouched down a bit so that Lethe could comfortably climb into her mouth. A nude Ilyana is giggling and holding Lethe's dangling right foot and sucking on her toes. Above Lethe's head is five gold stars and the text Lvl 1, above Tiki's head is five gold stars and level 40+10, and above Ilyana's head is four silver stars and level 40. (We only need these for this panel)
The text bubbles go like this for panel 1.
Lethe: I can't believe the summoner said he summoned me by mistake, and that he's already got a +10 Lethe, and that I'm +hp -atk whatever that means!
Tiki: Don't worry, I'll be very gentle with you. I won't swallow until you're satisfied.
Ilyana: Hehehe! You wouldn't believe how many times I've been foddered off to heroes! I wonder how you'd taste with some fondue...
Lethe: W-Would you perverts cut that out? I'll just say I'm never satisfied so you can't eat me!
Panel 2
Lethe is now laying inside Tiki's mouth with her head stuffed in the back of Tiki's throat. Her bare breasts are rubbing against Tiki's tongue while her butt is quivering in the air. Her legs are still dangling outside of Tiki's mouth, while Ilyana has a bowl of chocolate fondue and has dipped Lethe's entire right foot in chocolate. The bowl of chocolate should have a footprint in it the emphasize this fact, and the chocolate should drip off Lethe's foot. Inside Tiki's mouth we get an X-ray shot of Tiki's tongue inside of Lethe's vagina, snaking its way up towards her cervix a bit like this.
Text for panel 2.
Lethe: I-Ilyana!? What the hell do you think you're doing?! And you too Tiki!
Tiki: You're lucky I don't need to use my tongue to talk as a dragon. I told you I won't swallow until you're satisfied.
Ilyana: Oh Lethe... your feet are so pretty I couldn't resist! You don't know how long I've wanted to try this!
Lethe: W-Whatever! I'm a Laguz warrior! You can't make me surrender with j-just this!
Panel 3 (Large floating text that says 3 hours later)
The x-ray of Lethe's cervix is completely slimy now, and Tiki's tongue has worked its way inside while Lethe's entire body is quivering. This time we see an X-ray shot of Lethe's face inside of Tiki's throat and she looks a bit ahegao and almost foaming at the mouth. On the floor there are dozens of bowls with residue of fondue and whipped cream, jars of caramel, and other condiments while Ilyana is now sucking on Lethe's foot that is squeaky clean apart from Ilyana's saliva. Lethe's other foot is in a similar state, suggesting Ilyana has been switching back and forth between them.
Text for Panel 3.
Lethe: FOR THE LOVE OF ASHERA STAAAAAAHP~!!! I-I can't take anymore!
Tiki: I don't know Lethe? Are you sure you're satisfied~? I quite enjoyed when you woke up again an hour ago, and then you came so hard you spilled whipped cream on Ilyana.
Ilyana: It was a delicious but easily remedied problem for me.
Lethe: YES! PLEASE JUST SWALLOW ME ALREAEDY!! I CAN'T TAKE IT ANYMOOOOORE!!!
Panel 4
Lethe torso is down Tiki's throat now so only her butt cheeks and legs are sticking out. A little bit like this, except she would be in a bit deeper, it's not quite so tight a fit, and her feet are obviously supposed to be visible in the shot. This might be a better reference for what I have in mind, except Tiki isn't tilting her head back which is important for what Ilyana does in this panel. Ilyana brings Lethe's feet together to give them one last lingering lick along her soles, causing Lethe to shudder and orgasm again.
(No text for this panel)
Panel 5
Tiki's mouth closes and she swallows, while Ilyana traces her hand along the bulge in the dragon's neck.
Page 2
Panel 1
Tiki licks her lips and looks down at Ilyana while stroking her stomach with one claw. Ilyana blushes and looks a bit nervous.
Text for panel 1.
Tiki: Don't think I've forgotten about you Ilyana. Are you going to be a good girl, or would you rather squirm for a few hours like Lethe?
Ilyana: I-I'll be good... please be gentle with me Tiki... I'm more frail than Lethe is.
Panel 2
Tiki lowers her snout and opens her mouth up wide so that Ilyana can climb in. Ilyana benda down so that her breasts are hanging over Tiki's tongue.
(No text for this panel)
Panel 3
Ilyana curls up in Tiki's mouth sideways, hugging her knees close to her chest in the fetal position. It looks a little like this, except Tiki's mouth is smaller and Ilyana is more tightly curled up. The tip of Tiki's tongue has begun to tease Ilyana.
Text for panel 3.
Ilyana: Eeep!
Tiki: What's the matter Ilyana? Isn't this what you wanted? You volunteered for this, remember?
Ilyana: I-I... yes... just please be gentle!
Tiki: Don't worry sweet Ilyana, I'll be very tender with you.
Panel 4 (Large floating text that says 6 hours later)
We get an x-ray of Ilyana inside Tiki's mouth while Tiki the dragon seems to be blushing. Tiki's tongue has snaked its way up between Ilyana's legs, between her breasts, and the tip is being sucked on by Ilyana. Ilyana looks absolutely blissful while grinding against Tiki's tongue and sucking its tip.
Text for Panel 4.
Tiki: I know I said I wouldn't swallow Lethe until she was satisfied, but I never imagined with how shy you were, that you'd be this insatiable!
Ilyana: Mmm... please... just another five minutes... they don't call you a divine dragon for nothing.
Tiki: You said that two hours ago. I'm starting to wonder who the real predator is here.
Panel 5
Internal view of Ilyana getting swallowed down Tiki's throat butt first, while she drags her fingers trying to grip on Tiki's throat. Her legs are pressed against her face as she struggles, and her feet are trying to kick in futility.
Text for Panel 5.
Ilyana: Waaait! Just five more minutes!
Tiki: I just gave you ten! I know you had another orgasm just now, so that's it! I'm tired! Go bother Lethe if you're still feeling amorous!
Page 3
Now for this page we could potentially cut down on cost and workload by making it all variants of the same picture. Otherwise I was thinking we'd do a few different camera angles to spice things up.
Panel 1
Inside Tiki's stomach, Lethe looks sunburned and is laid back in a pool of stomach acid as if it were a hot tub and she were relaxing. This would be a straight forward view.
Text for panel 1.
Lethe: Sounds like the commotion finally died down up there. I wonder if Ilyana actually won?
Panel 2
Lethe looks up to see Ilyana's but sticking out of the stomach ceiling, and Lethe has a "WTF?" look on her face. This could either have the same straight view, or one from below and to the side of Lethd, where we're looking up with Lethe and her expression is conveyed in the text bubble.
Text for Panel 2.
Lethe: ?
Panel 3
Ilyana lands on Lethe with a loud wet splat, while Lethe freaks out, her tail standing on end. Same straight view, or a view from above with a good shot of Ilyana's vagina and feet as she lands on Lethe's lap.
Ilyana: Eeeeeeeek!
Lethe: SON OF A BITC-OWW!!
Panel 4
Ilyana happily wraps her arms around Lethe in a warm hug, looking overjoyed to be reunited with her. Lethe looks a bit grumpy, tsundere, blushing, but also just a little happy. Same straight view, or a sideways view that gives us a shot of Ilyana's feet and breasts as she hugs Lethe.
Text for panel 4
Ilyana: Oh Lethe! I'm so happy you're still alive! I was so worried!
Lethe: Well I'm a Laguz warrior, I won't be digested as easily as some silly Beorc. I'm more surprised to see you, I thought for sure Tiki wouldn't eat you with how long you held out for.
Ilyana: Oh! She cheated and swallowed me early! I guess she figured it was fair because I insisted on her being gentle with me.
Panel 5
Ilyana is licking her lips and looking at Lethe with a predatory gleam in her eyes. Lethe is trying to back away, but Tiki's stomach is too small for that. Same straightforward view, or a closeup with Ilyana and Lethe's faces.
Text for Panel 5.
Ilyana: She also suggested I should bother you if I'm still feeling amorous.
Lethe: N-Now Ilyana... L-Let's not be hasty! I've been digesting in here for hours and my whole body is sensitive!
Ilyana: Don't worry my pretty kitty... I'll be gentle.
Page 4
Panel 1
Ilyana pounces Lethe while Lethe looks alarmed and panicked.
(No text for panel 1)
Panel 2
Ilyana is aggressively scissoring Lethe, while holding Lethe's left leg up and sucking on Lethe's toes. Lethe looks embarrassed but doesn't resist, and seems to be reluctantly enjoying it.
Ilyana: Mmm... I could suck on your delicious toes forever Lethe.
Lethe: By the goddess, what is wrong with you girl!? And why do you make that feel so good!? Why won't you leave my poor feet alone?
Panel 3
Ilyana is eating out Lethe while balancing on her knees, her bare feet are tucked in close to her butt cheeks. Lethe has her legs together, with Ilyana's face buried between them and pressed up against her crotch. Lethe's feet are both pressing down on Ilyana's head as she's on the verge of a second orgasm.
Lethe: K-keep going! Ah! I'm about to reach it again… ngh! Oh goddess yes!
Panel 4
Tiki now in her human form, is kicking her feet up and relaxing in the bath. It may look something like this. She's looking down at her stomach and giggling with her hand to her mouth.
Text for panel 4.
Tiki: I can still feel them going at it in there, even in this form. Magic is truly a wondrous thing.
Panel 5
Tiki flexes his her feet teasingly at the viewer, while winking and blowing a kiss. Might look a little like this but feel free to use your own creative freedom here.
Text for Panel 5.
Tiki: I wonder if I should actually tease Ilyana with my feet sometime, now that I know she likes them so much... On second thought, maybe it's best if I keep them hidden from her, unless I'm desperately aroused. For now, this story is done.
Panel 1 (extra large) The scene takes place in the askr indoor baths. We get a side profile of nude Lethe, seated in Tiki's open mouth (Tiki is in her dragon form), while Tiki's tongue tip has inserted itself Lethe's vagina. Tiki is probably crouched down a bit so that Lethe could comfortably climb into her mouth. A nude Ilyana is giggling and holding Lethe's dangling right foot and sucking on her toes. Above Lethe's head is five gold stars and the text Lvl 1, above Tiki's head is five gold stars and level 40+10, and above Ilyana's head is four silver stars and level 40. (We only need these for this panel)
The text bubbles go like this for panel 1.
Lethe: I can't believe the summoner said he summoned me by mistake, and that he's already got a +10 Lethe, and that I'm +hp -atk whatever that means!
Tiki: Don't worry, I'll be very gentle with you. I won't swallow until you're satisfied.
Ilyana: Hehehe! You wouldn't believe how many times I've been foddered off to heroes! I wonder how you'd taste with some fondue...
Lethe: W-Would you perverts cut that out? I'll just say I'm never satisfied so you can't eat me!
Panel 2
Lethe is now laying inside Tiki's mouth with her head stuffed in the back of Tiki's throat. Her bare breasts are rubbing against Tiki's tongue while her butt is quivering in the air. Her legs are still dangling outside of Tiki's mouth, while Ilyana has a bowl of chocolate fondue and has dipped Lethe's entire right foot in chocolate. The bowl of chocolate should have a footprint in it the emphasize this fact, and the chocolate should drip off Lethe's foot. Inside Tiki's mouth we get an X-ray shot of Tiki's tongue inside of Lethe's vagina, snaking its way up towards her cervix a bit like this.
Text for panel 2.
Lethe: I-Ilyana!? What the hell do you think you're doing?! And you too Tiki!
Tiki: You're lucky I don't need to use my tongue to talk as a dragon. I told you I won't swallow until you're satisfied.
Ilyana: Oh Lethe... your feet are so pretty I couldn't resist! You don't know how long I've wanted to try this!
Lethe: W-Whatever! I'm a Laguz warrior! You can't make me surrender with j-just this!
Panel 3 (Large floating text that says 3 hours later)
The x-ray of Lethe's cervix is completely slimy now, and Tiki's tongue has worked its way inside while Lethe's entire body is quivering. This time we see an X-ray shot of Lethe's face inside of Tiki's throat and she looks a bit ahegao and almost foaming at the mouth. On the floor there are dozens of bowls with residue of fondue and whipped cream, jars of caramel, and other condiments while Ilyana is now sucking on Lethe's foot that is squeaky clean apart from Ilyana's saliva. Lethe's other foot is in a similar state, suggesting Ilyana has been switching back and forth between them.
Text for Panel 3.
Lethe: FOR THE LOVE OF ASHERA STAAAAAAHP~!!! I-I can't take anymore!
Tiki: I don't know Lethe? Are you sure you're satisfied~? I quite enjoyed when you woke up again an hour ago, and then you came so hard you spilled whipped cream on Ilyana.
Ilyana: It was a delicious but easily remedied problem for me.
Lethe: YES! PLEASE JUST SWALLOW ME ALREAEDY!! I CAN'T TAKE IT ANYMOOOOORE!!!
Panel 4
Lethe torso is down Tiki's throat now so only her butt cheeks and legs are sticking out. A little bit like this, except she would be in a bit deeper, it's not quite so tight a fit, and her feet are obviously supposed to be visible in the shot. This might be a better reference for what I have in mind, except Tiki isn't tilting her head back which is important for what Ilyana does in this panel. Ilyana brings Lethe's feet together to give them one last lingering lick along her soles, causing Lethe to shudder and orgasm again.
(No text for this panel)
Panel 5
Tiki's mouth closes and she swallows, while Ilyana traces her hand along the bulge in the dragon's neck.
Page 2
Panel 1
Tiki licks her lips and looks down at Ilyana while stroking her stomach with one claw. Ilyana blushes and looks a bit nervous.
Text for panel 1.
Tiki: Don't think I've forgotten about you Ilyana. Are you going to be a good girl, or would you rather squirm for a few hours like Lethe?
Ilyana: I-I'll be good... please be gentle with me Tiki... I'm more frail than Lethe is.
Panel 2
Tiki lowers her snout and opens her mouth up wide so that Ilyana can climb in. Ilyana benda down so that her breasts are hanging over Tiki's tongue.
(No text for this panel)
Panel 3
Ilyana curls up in Tiki's mouth sideways, hugging her knees close to her chest in the fetal position. It looks a little like this, except Tiki's mouth is smaller and Ilyana is more tightly curled up. The tip of Tiki's tongue has begun to tease Ilyana.
Text for panel 3.
Ilyana: Eeep!
Tiki: What's the matter Ilyana? Isn't this what you wanted? You volunteered for this, remember?
Ilyana: I-I... yes... just please be gentle!
Tiki: Don't worry sweet Ilyana, I'll be very tender with you.
Panel 4 (Large floating text that says 6 hours later)
We get an x-ray of Ilyana inside Tiki's mouth while Tiki the dragon seems to be blushing. Tiki's tongue has snaked its way up between Ilyana's legs, between her breasts, and the tip is being sucked on by Ilyana. Ilyana looks absolutely blissful while grinding against Tiki's tongue and sucking its tip.
Text for Panel 4.
Tiki: I know I said I wouldn't swallow Lethe until she was satisfied, but I never imagined with how shy you were, that you'd be this insatiable!
Ilyana: Mmm... please... just another five minutes... they don't call you a divine dragon for nothing.
Tiki: You said that two hours ago. I'm starting to wonder who the real predator is here.
Panel 5
Internal view of Ilyana getting swallowed down Tiki's throat butt first, while she drags her fingers trying to grip on Tiki's throat. Her legs are pressed against her face as she struggles, and her feet are trying to kick in futility.
Text for Panel 5.
Ilyana: Waaait! Just five more minutes!
Tiki: I just gave you ten! I know you had another orgasm just now, so that's it! I'm tired! Go bother Lethe if you're still feeling amorous!
Page 3
Now for this page we could potentially cut down on cost and workload by making it all variants of the same picture. Otherwise I was thinking we'd do a few different camera angles to spice things up.
Panel 1
Inside Tiki's stomach, Lethe looks sunburned and is laid back in a pool of stomach acid as if it were a hot tub and she were relaxing. This would be a straight forward view.
Text for panel 1.
Lethe: Sounds like the commotion finally died down up there. I wonder if Ilyana actually won?
Panel 2
Lethe looks up to see Ilyana's but sticking out of the stomach ceiling, and Lethe has a "WTF?" look on her face. This could either have the same straight view, or one from below and to the side of Lethd, where we're looking up with Lethe and her expression is conveyed in the text bubble.
Text for Panel 2.
Lethe: ?
Panel 3
Ilyana lands on Lethe with a loud wet splat, while Lethe freaks out, her tail standing on end. Same straight view, or a view from above with a good shot of Ilyana's vagina and feet as she lands on Lethe's lap.
Ilyana: Eeeeeeeek!
Lethe: SON OF A BITC-OWW!!
Panel 4
Ilyana happily wraps her arms around Lethe in a warm hug, looking overjoyed to be reunited with her. Lethe looks a bit grumpy, tsundere, blushing, but also just a little happy. Same straight view, or a sideways view that gives us a shot of Ilyana's feet and breasts as she hugs Lethe.
Text for panel 4
Ilyana: Oh Lethe! I'm so happy you're still alive! I was so worried!
Lethe: Well I'm a Laguz warrior, I won't be digested as easily as some silly Beorc. I'm more surprised to see you, I thought for sure Tiki wouldn't eat you with how long you held out for.
Ilyana: Oh! She cheated and swallowed me early! I guess she figured it was fair because I insisted on her being gentle with me.
Panel 5
Ilyana is licking her lips and looking at Lethe with a predatory gleam in her eyes. Lethe is trying to back away, but Tiki's stomach is too small for that. Same straightforward view, or a closeup with Ilyana and Lethe's faces.
Text for Panel 5.
Ilyana: She also suggested I should bother you if I'm still feeling amorous.
Lethe: N-Now Ilyana... L-Let's not be hasty! I've been digesting in here for hours and my whole body is sensitive!
Ilyana: Don't worry my pretty kitty... I'll be gentle.
Page 4
Panel 1
Ilyana pounces Lethe while Lethe looks alarmed and panicked.
(No text for panel 1)
Panel 2
Ilyana is aggressively scissoring Lethe, while holding Lethe's left leg up and sucking on Lethe's toes. Lethe looks embarrassed but doesn't resist, and seems to be reluctantly enjoying it.
Ilyana: Mmm... I could suck on your delicious toes forever Lethe.
Lethe: By the goddess, what is wrong with you girl!? And why do you make that feel so good!? Why won't you leave my poor feet alone?
Panel 3
Ilyana is eating out Lethe while balancing on her knees, her bare feet are tucked in close to her butt cheeks. Lethe has her legs together, with Ilyana's face buried between them and pressed up against her crotch. Lethe's feet are both pressing down on Ilyana's head as she's on the verge of a second orgasm.
Lethe: K-keep going! Ah! I'm about to reach it again… ngh! Oh goddess yes!
Panel 4
Tiki now in her human form, is kicking her feet up and relaxing in the bath. It may look something like this. She's looking down at her stomach and giggling with her hand to her mouth.
Text for panel 4.
Tiki: I can still feel them going at it in there, even in this form. Magic is truly a wondrous thing.
Panel 5
Tiki flexes his her feet teasingly at the viewer, while winking and blowing a kiss. Might look a little like this but feel free to use your own creative freedom here.
Text for Panel 5.
Tiki: I wonder if I should actually tease Ilyana with my feet sometime, now that I know she likes them so much... On second thought, maybe it's best if I keep them hidden from her, unless I'm desperately aroused. For now, this story is done.
